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Need opinion on a very short story?

Published on November 11, 2010 By Green Business Opportunity Review

I just need some opinion on this. Any criticism is appreciated
And PLEASE; if you don’t read it all the way through, DONT COMMENT. I Don’t need useless opinion by someone who didn’t get past paragraph 5.
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Where’s the Little Limping Girl?
As a high school teacher, I was used to seeing kids as they passed [...]

I need advice on this short story?

Published on November 11, 2010 By Green Business Opportunity Review

Well, for one I’m only fourteen, so it’s difficult getting a teacher’s perspective just right. Adults; any advice on perspective?
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Where’s the Little Limping Girl?
As a high school teacher, I was used to seeing kids as they passed through the hallways; trudging, running or dancing their way to classes, often making it just before the bell [...]

Teachers: Need Help On Perspective?

Published on November 9, 2010 By Green Business Opportunity Review

Well, I’m only fourteen so I can’t be sure I’m totally correct on the way I’m making this history teacher veiw the world. This is just the way I think a teacher would look at things. So any advice on perspective, even any on the story itself, would be fantastic.
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Where’s the Little Limping Girl?
As a [...]

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